The Taniwha
The Taniwha arrived in the gateway. its chop of wing drops Pose ion. He could see the people but the people could not see his real body because he shapshified. His wings tern into hands. He was thing how bib he shapshified. He heard the haka. He feet happy and existed. When he opened its mouth he shot fiver out of its. The people ran away and Taniwha ran out of the marae. the Taniwha look a dangers animal but he has a scaly body. the end
Great story! Next time you should make the writing longer and say what the taniwha looks like. I think that the people at the marae must have been scared.
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DeleteGreat story Aniket. Maybe you should make the story longer. I like how you said "it chop of wings drops poison".
ReplyDeletethis is an amazing story but maybe describe the taniwha.
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